Tuesday, 30 July 2013

decrypting_exemplification

_WHY ARE KOREANS INTERESTING?
   
    South Korea. “Land of The Morning Calm”, is a land of opposites existing in conjunction of each other. It combines ancient oriental tradition with modern technology. Following its miraculous development over the last 50 years, Korea is now a modernised vibrant nation that still maintains its traditional culture. Han-in or literally “great people” in Korean language practice kibun or their code of living which turns their social harmony into a crucial culture. Having interviewed one of them recently, we noticed Koreans are interesting because they have their own unique way of keeping tab of their age, consider our food are similar to theirs and listen to their particular homegrown music genre which is K-Pop, specifically songs from the “Shinhwa” K-Pop group.
    Firstly, the curious case of Korean age makes them interesting. The first rule for counting Korean age is that Korean babies at the moment of their nascency, is one year old precisely. Let’s say a Korean baby was born in 2013. On that year, the baby’s age was already one year old. A Malaysian baby, on the other hand, was born on the same year. Yet, the baby’s age was still not one year old until the year 2014.   Furthermore, Korean age keeps on adding at New Year’s Day instead of birthdays in contrary to popular belief. For instance, Ji-young Jang is 22 years old in Korea. However, her age is not added one year on her birthday that is on 23rd of December 2013. Her age is added one year on the 1st of January 2014 instead. Nobody knows how this peculiar canon started yet it has been carried out for such a long time until it is an official way of counting age in Korea.   In conclusion, the bizarre way of counting age in Korea truly amuses us.
    In addition, the issue that raises our own curiosity is the fact that Koreans consider our food is quite similar to theirs. Much alike to ours, their food is largely based upon rice and chicken meat. Their steam-cooked short-grain rice are similar to the rice we eat.  Dolsotbap is a cooked rice in a pot which is then serve with some side dishes called bachan. Our people in Malaysia practice the same style in serving the rice too, although at here we called it as nasi campur. Chicken meat is often served roasted or braised with vegetables or in soups. Similar to Malaysian, we also serve it roasted which called ayam goreng and in soup namely sup ayam.  All parts of the chicken are used in Korean cuisine, including the gizzard, liver, and wing. The wing of the chicken, called dakbal, are often roasted and covered with hot and spicy gochujang-based sauce. Malaysian, on the other hand, roast the wing of the chicken and served it with spicy chili sauce. They called this dish as the kepak ayam madu. To conclude, the Asian culture does not really differentiate the texture and zest of culinary between Malaysia and Korea.
    Lastly, K-Pop is certainly food to the ears of all Koreans out there and among the K-Pop groups that flourish in this era of Korean music is Shinhwa (myth). It is a South Korean boy band which consists of six members. Shinhwa is famous because of their talent in dancing. Their dances are often filled with heavy choreography, with a few free style moves once in a while. They also feature break dancers in the background of many of their performances as well as female dancers dancing with and around them. Their dance moves has been describe as "evil," "complicated," and "difficult-to-follow" with few people being able to copy their dance moves. Shinhwa is also well-known for their variety of musical styles. Shinhwa has changed musical styles many times throughout their existence, beginning with typical bubblegum pop songs (as seen with their song “Eusha, Eusha”) like other pop singers at the time. They also did regular pop songs as well, with the release of their 4th album “Hey, Come On!”. It would be in the release of their 7th album, “Brand New” that Shinhwa would transition into dance songs. With the release of their 8th album, State Of The Art, Shinhwa can still be seen having dance songs as well as, though their hit song, “Once In A Lifetime” shows a more slow pop style. As a conclusion, Shinhwa are famously renowned for their amazing dance performance and for their creation of variety popular genre of musics.

       In a nutshell, Koreans are interesting due to their own unique way of determining one’s age, similar choice of food and awesome preference of music. As stated previously, their inner kibun enters into every facet of their lives, enfolding regardless of any aspect palpable. Intertwined between the rapid growth of modernisation and perennial tradition, Korea advances through this aeon under the flagship of its own citizens. Righteously stands up to its status, the “Land of the Morning Calm” aspires to embrace the opposites on a same cause of constructing a better nation. A nation widely known as South Korea.

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_The following excerpt is a review made by a humanoid regarding on an essay entitled 'Why Koreans are interesting'. As quoted by the transmitter, the introduction is magnificent and the thesis statement is stated clearly. In other words, readers can comprehend what are the information given out about the Koreans in general. The interpretation is classified using revising sentences such as parallelism, consistent point of view, specific words, active verbs and concise words. Extracting message_ 1 of 2:>// 0|1|1|0||E|N|J|O|Y|0|1|1|0

PARALLELISM_

I notice that he doesn't have any problems regarding the issue. He balances the items mentioned properly. Thus, the sentences in his essay are clear and easy to read. For instance:-

"Koreans are interesting because they have their own way of keeping tab of their age, consider our food are similar to them and listen to their particular homegrown music genre which is K-Pop".

CONSISTENCY_

From my perspective, I think the writer did a very good job on using consistent point of view. By the virtue of that, he did not shift verb tenses unnecessarily. As in example:-

"Nobody knows how this peculiar canon started yet it has been carried out for such a long time until it is an official way of counting age in Korea. In conclusion, the bizarre way of counting age in Korea truly amuses me".

SPECIFIC WORDS_

He is really meticulous on elaborating his sentences as he specifically told the readers some usually overlooked yet important points. However, he missed out a few of them on certain occasions such as "K-Pop is certainly food to the ears of all Koreans out there". His writing was correct most of the time, though.

"Traditional Korean meals called hanjeongsik noted for the number of side dishes or banchan that accompany steam-cooked rice".

CONCISE WORDS_

Great things come in small packages. His usage of words in the essay seemingly displays his ability to summarize it into a brief yet comprehensive essay. The example is as follows:-

"The Koreans consider our food is quite similar to theirs".

ACTIVE VERBS_

From this aspect, I think he did use it in some of his sentences. Most of them can stand on their own. Here's an example:-

"We found out that rice in Malaysia is spread evenly to accommodate spaces compared to Korean ones which are more sticky and substantial in appearance".


VARYING SENTENCES_

I notice that the writer uses a lot of coordinating words but in my opinion, I think that subordinating words should be used more frequently. Furthermore, the writer has a tendency to use special opening word or phrase at the beginning of his sentences. Lastly, the writer includes a variety of adjectives and verbs which is very pleasant to the eyes of the readers.


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